The EQing could be slightly off. I usually try my tracks on several sound systems before I'm done. It sounds fine on my monitors, but I haven't tried anything else. Needs a few adjustments, but it's late, I don't have a controller keyboard (so things were tedious,) and blah blah... Enough excuses
Perhaps I'd get more responses with "Take a smoke" ???? Just sittin' here smokin' aaahhhhoooohhhhhaaaaahhh Just sittin' here smokin'. Ahh won't you get me high, puff that blunt... Take a smoke. Ohhhhhaaaahhhhhoooohhhhh...
I listened to it once this morning and liked the way the beat came in (if that makes sense); I'll have to give it another listen later when I'm more awake.